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Wednesday, January 26, 2005
Green Line -- BU to Park Street
He sits,
hand shielding his eyes against
the snow-amplified sunlight.
Then the trolley squeals into the tunnel.
His commuter face set blankly against eye-contact,
he lowers his hands
to the back of the empty seat in front
to brace against the sharp turns.
The screech of brakes predicts a station.
The dim light slides past the window,
the glass so fogged and filthy
that only vague shapes can be seen outside.
Doors hiss open; bodies flow in.
Deep in insularity
he ignores the new passengers.
Then he jerks in shock.
His hands still clutch
the top of the forward seat.
Now a mass of brown curls,
smelling sweetly of shampoo,
cascades from under a raspberry colored knit cap
and over his hands
tickling sweetly.
He starts to pull back from the intrusive sensation,
but hesitates,
and settles back in the seat
looking at the hair.
He blinks.
A single tear
reflects the fluorescents from the corner of his eye.
He sits
savoring the inadvertant contact.
He glimpses
her face in the window's reflection.
It’s pleasant, blank, a commuter face.
The stations ooze by outside,
like a slow slide show.
At one station he tenses
and starts to stand,
then settles back never taking his eyes off the curls.
After two more stops,
the woman turns her head and stands.
Caught by surprise,
he makes a small sound.
She turns,
looks down at him
and at his hands.
She smiles.
The smile transforms her face.
Momentarily she is
startlingly beautiful.
“Sorry,” she says.
His mouth quirks at a corner.
"It was nothing," he says.
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